Easy Fund Raising Ideas

Question: how to I make the sentence more smooth and concise?

I am writing a Fundraising Letter, and I want to make these sentence more concise and smooth. Specially the last sentence, are there anyway to combine the last sentence to make the paragraph look nicer? Any suggestion will be fine

Thank you so much for reading my thread

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However, today’s tough economic conditions make it difficult for Buckeye Bread Basket to meet those needs without helps from people like you. We will have our holiday fundraising sale to raise the money, planning to sell holiday greeting cards, which come in boxes of ten. An original watercolor scene was created by a famous Ohio artist.
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Answer: However, today’s tough economic conditions make it difficult for Buckeye Bread Basket to meet those needs without help from people like you. We will have our holiday fundraising sale to raise the money, where we plan to sell holiday greeting cards that will depict an original watercolor scene created by a famous Ohio artist and they will come in boxes of ten.

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